Final Idea

Final improved storyline
There is a man walking down the street, his name is Dan. He works as a mechanic in small town. The street is busy and he is walking slow as the cars rush past him. Slow emotional music plays to add to the depressing atmosphere.
Flashback- Dan is sitting with a woman they are having coffee. The woman is called Hannah she is a primary school teacher. They talk about their jobs and their families. They laugh and flirt, Hannah twirls her hair and they make prolonged eye contact.
Dan goes is going into his house, it is a small terrace house on a quiet cul-de-sac. There is no one around he looks even lonelier than before as he slowly puts the key in the door and goes inside.
Flashback- Dan and Hannah are stood outside the same house. It is dark and they are stood under a light in front of the door. They talk about how they have had a really lovely evening and then Dan asks Hannah inside. She accepts and he leans in and kisses her.
Dan goes into the front room there is a large TV, a leather sofa and dining room table. It is small and clutter free. Dan takes his coat of and slumps onto the sofa.
Flashback- a group of people are all crowed round a car waving and shouting good luck. They are dressed smartly and some are holding glasses of champagne. The car in front has Dan and Hannah are inside the car. Just married is written on the back and cans are hanging on the bumper.
Dan is sat at the dinner table it is set for one. He eats slowly looking around in the silence.
Flashback- Dan and Hannah are sat eating a romantic dinner there are candles and the curtains are drawn. It is their one year anniversary. They drink wine and Dan gives Hannah a beautiful diamond necklace.
Dan goes into the kitchen and puts his plates into the skink, he turns the kettle on. Then he goes over to the fridge and opens it.
Flashback- the fridge closes there is an ultra sound picture of a baby the kettle goes off and Dan shouts to Hannah is she wants biscuits. Hannah walks in, she has a baby bump. She walks to Dan and they kiss against the counter.
There is a montage of newspaper clippings and a news report saying a young pregnant woman has been stabbed. There are pictures of Hannah and the man who attacked her in the newspapers.
Dan goes upstairs and passing a room that set up like a nursery. He goes into his into his bedroom and shuts the door.
Flashback- Dan and Hannah in bed play fighting and cuddling. They kiss and there is a close up of Hannah’s face.
Close up of Dan’s face and then is pans out to show him alone in the big double bed.
The present day is shown in black and white and the flashbacks in color. Ther flashbacks will also be shown from Dan's point of view. So effectivly the camera will be Dan and you will only be able to see Hannah and how he sees her. This will enable the audience to make a connection to the characters.